Comment on my vows please!

lifeonthehill · February 2013

FI and I are working on our vows now and I think I got mine down. I am looking for and comments or critisisim without having to ask family/friends. TIA
The sickness and in health is something that is funny to us since one of us is alwasy sick.

Fiance. I love you. You truly are my best friend.
I want to thank you for being strong for me when I can't be.
Today I give myself to you in marriage and in life.
I promise to encourage and support you in everything you do,
to laugh with you everyday, in sickness and in health
and to comfort you in times of struggle.
I promise to love you in good times and in bad,
when life is easy and when it is hard,
I promise to cherish you always.
These are the things I vow to you today, and for the rest of our life together.

QueerFemme · February 2013

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[QUOTE]FI and I are working on our vows now and I think I got mine down. I am looking for and comments or critisisim without having to ask family/friends. TIA The sickness and in health is something that is funny to us since one of us is alwasy sick. Fiance. I love you. You truly are my best friend. I want to thank you for being strong for me when I can't be. Today I give myself to you in marriage and in life. I promise to encourage and support you in everything you do, to laugh with you everyday, in sickness and in health and to comfort you in times of struggle. I promise to love you in good times and in bad, when life is easy and when it is hard, I promise to cherish you always. These are the things I vow to you today, and for the rest of our life together.
Posted by alyssaames[/QUOTE]

I think they sound very nice! I would read them out loud though. the only thing I can see is that they seem a little short. Nothing wrong with short. But, just make sure you want them that short. When you read them outloud, you'll realize how quickly you are done. :)

lifeonthehill · February 2013

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[QUOTE]In Response to Comment on my vows please! : I think they sound very nice! I would read them out loud though. the only thing I can see is that they seem a little short. Nothing wrong with short. But, just make sure you want them that short. When you read them outloud, you'll realize how quickly you are done. :)
Posted by cmgilpin[/QUOTE]

Thank you! Good point! We were hoping to keep them under a minute each but this might actually fall short. I will have to time myself.