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  aprahamian2

  

  March 2012

  It came out pretty small when I clicked on it- could you make it any bigger? 

  

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  Smashleyk

  

  March 2012

  It's too small to read

  

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  SSaltzman87 member

  

  March 2012

  It's too small for me to read too :-(

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  FutureMrsG2013 member

  

  March 2012

  Yepp, too small to read. Could you copy/paste the text so we can read it, or make it bigger?

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  RebCappon

  

  March 2012

  Too small
  
  I recieved an e-mail from the woman doing my invites and save the dates telling me I needed to pick a design. I have so many that I like and I don't know what to go with! Tough decision.

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  SRRL18 member

  

  March 2012 edited March 2012

  Ugh, sorry, I will fix it at home tonight.
  
  Does this sound right, it's the part I'm most worried about. My dad and step mom as well as my mom are helping pay for part of the wedding. I want them both included in the invitation. This is what I wrote:
  
  Mr. & Mrs. Do as well as Ms. So
  request the honor of you presence..
  
  Is there another way I should word it or is that ok?

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  SSaltzman87 member

  

  March 2012

  You could say 'together with their families, Ms. SRRL & Mr. SRRL request the pleasure of your company/request the honor of your presence'

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  FutureMrsG2013 member

  

  March 2012

  You could do it like this:
  Mr. & Mrs. Soandso
  Ms. Soandso
  request the honor of your presence.....
  
  or do, together with their families
  
  I like the first option though, because it has their names on it so they will feel the recognition if that makes sense?
  

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  SRRL18 member

  

  March 2012

  We aren't doing "together with their families" because I feel that my parents deserve the recognition that they are contributing to the wedding. I know it kinda sounds bad not including FI's parents but he seems to be on the same boat as me.
  
  I hope this one works. I saved the larger view image from vistraprint.
  

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  FutureMrsG2013 member

  

  March 2012

  That image is better. I would say if you want to recognize them, then I would change it to:
  Mr. and Mrs. Soandso
  Ms. Soandso2
  Request the honour of your presence...
  
  the "as well" sounds a little weird to me

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