I am sending out my save the date's soon . I was thinking about maybe putting my wedding website at the bottom . So people could check it for updates because we have alot of out of town guest coming . How would I word that? Is it bad etiquette ? I was thinking maybe something like this
Your presence is requested
at the wedding of
Dawn Bellane
and
Christopher Taylor
on May 12, 2012
Seattle, Washington
Invitation will follow
www.thewebsite.com or
It's written in the stars
that they were meant to be...
So write it on your calendar
There's going to be a party!
Save the date of
June 1, 2012
for the marriage of
Tina Wilson
and
Greg Flock
Invitation and details to follow
www.thewebsite.com or
Jack and Jill
are getting married on
July 5, 2005
San Francisco, California
Formal invitation to follow
www.thewebsite.com Thanks in advance.
We are not getting married at our church . Were getting married at really nice senior center in our neighborhood or a knights of columbus . I am actually going later today to see what one we want . Nothing to fancy . But it is still semi-formal and Our family will ALL be there (Gparents and all). MOst of our church friends will be there too.
I think I like the 2nd one