Please help proof my invites + insert cards

CleverThought · March 2013

Hey guys,

I'm reordering my invitations due to a typo blunder and I guess am really anxious and want to make sure that the wording is correct and such.

Mr. & Mrs. My Parents
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Bride First Middle
to
Groom First Middle Last
Son of
Mr. & Mrs. His Parent

Saturday, the sixth of July
Two thousand and thirteen
at three o'clock in the afternoon

Church Name
Address
City, State

Reception to Follow

Reply
Please respond by June 3rd
___ Seat(s) have been reserved
in your honor
M__________________
____ Accepts ____Declines
Please initial each guest's entree selection
___Herb Crusted Chicken
___Peppercorn Crusted Tenderloin (cooked medium)
___Vegetable Napoleon

I will dance if you play ___________
by ____________

Reception
Please join us for cocktails, dinner, & dancing
at five o'clock in the evening
in honor of the new
Mr. & Mrs. New Last Name

Hotel Name
Address
City, State

Accommodations
We have reserved a block of rooms
at Hotel #1
for a rate of $109/night.
Call phone # and mention
the X-Y wedding.
Reservations must be made by June 13th

An additional block of rooms has been reserved
at Hotel # 2 for a rate of $89/night.
Call phone # and mention
the X-Y wedding.
Reservations must be made by June 16th

Visting www.x-ywedding.com
for more information

Some layout might look weird because of space allowed on each insert/character limits. Please let me know if everything looks okay before I press go on these babies!

banana468 · March 2013

The "T" in two thousand and thirteen should not be capitalized.

Also, five o'clock is still afternoon, not evening.

Is there a reason the response date is so early? It really shouldn't be more than a month before the big day.

CleverThought · March 2013

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_invites-paper_please-help-proof-my-invites-insert-cards?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:cd062f89-8272-496a-b0ab-225e1f87acecDiscussion:bc3e9234-962d-4275-9a40-c85540a1e318Post:c652ce55-85ee-4be9-b63e-828cf481ec8a">Re: Please help proof my invites + insert cards</a>:
[QUOTE]The "T" in two thousand and thirteen should not be capitalized. Also, five o'clock is still afternoon, not evening. Is there a reason the response date is so early? It really shouldn't be more than a month before the big day.
Posted by banana468[/QUOTE]
It's because the venue requires 15 business days notice (Which is June 17th) So I figured the 3rd would give us ample time to round up stragglers and make escort cards.

Thanks for your feedback!

kristinanddan · March 2013

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_invites-paper_please-help-proof-my-invites-insert-cards?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:cd062f89-8272-496a-b0ab-225e1f87acecDiscussion:bc3e9234-962d-4275-9a40-c85540a1e318Post:c652ce55-85ee-4be9-b63e-828cf481ec8a">Re: Please help proof my invites + insert cards</a>:
[QUOTE]The "T" in two thousand and thirteen should not be capitalized. Also, five o'clock is still afternoon, not evening. Is there a reason the response date is so early? It really shouldn't be more than a month before the big day.
Posted by banana468[/QUOTE]

<div>Also, son shouldn't be capitalized either</div>