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Save the dates! PIP

After 12+ designs FI and I have settled on a STD haha! They are postcards and I was pretty unsure of what to write on the back...thoughts?  Any editing on the front?  Overall I really like them. Critique/feedback is appreciated :)







June 16, 2012
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Re: Save the dates! PIP

  • Sue-n-KevinSue-n-Kevin member
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    edited December 2011
    They are cute. However "Calenders" should be "Calendars". It's mis-spelled.

    "Calender" is a machine that smooths cloth. "Calendar" is the item we use to keep track of months and dates.

    Other than that, I think the wording is fine.

    Congrats! Great job!
  • MMRoberts11MMRoberts11 member
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    edited December 2011
    I really like it.  I agree with Sue though about Calendar.
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  • edited December 2011
    Other than "calendar," I love it!!!!!!!!!
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  • acaponi87acaponi87 member
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    edited December 2011
    Haha thanks ladies! Spelling is fixed!
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  • edited December 2011
    Looks great! Where are you guys getting married at? Sound like my wedding a month after yours. We are getting married at Greystone. I was also going to check out the Hampton Inn this weekend. How did that go??? Details please!
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  • acaponi87acaponi87 member
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    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/local-wedding-boards_michigan-detroit_save-dates-pip-1?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Local%20Wedding%20BoardsForum:88Discussion:677c91d0-a990-42b9-b608-53a58e8826c3Post:ffe3c7ca-7d9f-4abe-9963-51b8f0958710">Re: Save the dates! PIP</a>:
    [QUOTE]Looks great! Where are you guys getting married at? Sound like my wedding a month after yours. We are getting married at Greystone. I was also going to check out the Hampton Inn this weekend. How did that go??? Details please!
    Posted by annerenee07[/QUOTE]

    Yep we are at Greystone too! I went and checked out the Hampton and it is absolutely gorgeous. Really looks very good. Just a couple of years old and everything is very nice. Talk to Dana to book rooms/shuttle and everything. I think we are paying about $275 to set up the shuttle for after the ceremony. It's free for (all) hotel guests before like 10.  I was going to check out the Hyatt Place as well but after I saw the Hampton I really liked it and just went with it lol. It's also the closest to Greystone. Let me know if you have any other questions! We can be Greystone planning buddies :)
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  • edited December 2011
    I will have to look into the shuttle thing, do you know if it lasts longer than 10pm because obviously we have the hall until 11:30? We will definitely have to message eachother and discuss what each of us are doing ie menu and other things. Did you happen to go to the Mother's day brunch? The food was absolutely to die for at least that was what I had thought? Have you met with Maggie much? I was wondering when I should meet with her, probably soon I would think, right since we are only eight mths away? So excited!!!
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  • edited December 2011
    We did postcards too, and I also struggled with what to put on the back side. We ended up putting a short poem as opposed to the story about how we met (which was what they did on the sample). Ours said
    Our day is fast approaching
    And we can hardly wait
    We've saved a seat
    that's just for you
    So be sure to save the date!
  • acaponi87acaponi87 member
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    edited December 2011
    Anne Renee---I sent you a message :)

    Kristie--I like the idea of a poem! That's really cute!
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