Business card help

Y I Oughta · April 2012

Which one do you like? The back will be the quote with whatever background I choose. The empty space on the front will have the address and phone number of the salon. The salon tagline is "Today's styles at yesterday's prices". I need a broad range of opinions so this was the best place I could think of for the help. Thanks in advance.

#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

Back side of card

While I'm at it, is the tagline correct? I feel like the ' shouldn't be in today's and yesterday's.It just doesn't look right either way.

ETA: to fix info about tagline

shaydenise · April 2012

I like number 3 the best. 1 is very similar to that, just "softer" so I guess it depends on what impression/look you're going for. 4 is too difficult to read because of the background, and I like 5 but I think you're info might get lost in the pattern.

cheeseandrice · April 2012

The tagline looks like it belongs to the salon, not you. Does that make sense? Maybe put the salon and contact info, then:
Mandi, stylist
"Today's cuts and yesterday's prices"

SarahPLiz · April 2012

I like 2 the best. It seems the most clean and the text takes center stage.

SarahPLiz · April 2012

And the apostrophes are correct. Today posesses its prices...

Y I Oughta · April 2012

Steph. The tagline does belong to the salon. I don't know what happened to the rest of the text that was supposed to be there.

cheeseandrice · April 2012

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_snarky-brides_business-card-help?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:17Discussion:3fa8919a-e887-4335-a56a-76ed2d9eb8e3Post:33b2e248-f692-4a36-b71f-b0dba1ef3250">Re: Business card help</a>:
[QUOTE]Steph. The tagline does belong to the salon. I don't know what happened to the rest of the text that was supposed to be there.
Posted by Y I Oughta[/QUOTE]

oh ok! :) Nevermind what I said then.

mehgank · April 2012

I like #4 the best, if you can make the background picture a bit more transparent so that it doesn't overpower the text. But yeah, I like that one.

KateJ10 · April 2012

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_snarky-brides_business-card-help?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:17Discussion:3fa8919a-e887-4335-a56a-76ed2d9eb8e3Post:76ab647f-87e0-4bf7-90e2-0a8456cb6e69">Re: Business card help</a>:
[QUOTE]I like #4 the best, if you can make the background picture a bit more transparent so that it doesn't overpower the text. But yeah, I like that one.
Posted by mehgank[/QUOTE]

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</div><div>I like this idea of making it a bit more transparent. That is my favorite background also, but I agree it is a little hard to read as is.</div>

KateJ10 · April 2012

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_snarky-brides_business-card-help?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:17Discussion:3fa8919a-e887-4335-a56a-76ed2d9eb8e3Post:76ab647f-87e0-4bf7-90e2-0a8456cb6e69">Re: Business card help</a>:
[QUOTE]I like #4 the best, if you can make the background picture a bit more transparent so that it doesn't overpower the text. But yeah, I like that one.
Posted by mehgank[/QUOTE]

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</div><div>I like this idea of making it a bit more transparent. That is my favorite background also, but I agree it is a little hard to read as is.</div>