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XP: Critique my wording and grammar please!

pantherRNpantherRN member
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in Pennsylvania-Pittsburgh
Together with their familes

PantherRN
and
FI of PantherRN

request the honor of your presence
as they are united in marriage

Saturday, the twelfth of May
Two thousand twelve
at three o'clock in the afternoon

Venue
Venue address
City, State

Celebration to follow

This is exactly as it appears on the invite. I THINK I have the wording right, I'm concerned about spelling/grammar/punctuation.

Thanks!
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Re: XP: Critique my wording and grammar please!

  • cgyvhucgyvhu member
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    edited December 2011
    did you XP on invites and paper?? They helped me last week when I did this :)

    It looks right to me.  I dont think you have to put in the afternoon, but i think it works well.  
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  • pantherRNpantherRN member
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    edited December 2011
    M, I XP'd everywhere, lol.

    And seriously, I can't believe we are doing this. Where has the last year and half gone?
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