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is this weird? HELP!!!!

is it weird that i want traditional vows but i want to be able to more or less write them so they sound the way i want them too? 
Im having trouble finishing them. i know what i want them to say and i have them mostly writen but im having trouble making it flow. this is what i have. any sugestions? 

I christina, take you james to be my lawfully wedded husband. I promise to love and honor you, through the good times and the bad. To laugh and cry with you, I pledge my fiath and love to you.

I feel like there should be somthing else said between "to laugh and cry with you" and "i pledge my faith and love to you" but i cant think  of anything that flows. please help.

Re: is this weird? HELP!!!!

  • What if you said "To laugh and cry with you so I pledge my faith and love to you." or "To laugh and cry with you, and with this ring I pledge my faith and love to you."
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  • What if you just move the wording around a bit. I christina, take you james to be my lawfully wedded husband. I promise to love and honor you, through the good times and the bad. To laugh and cry with you, I pledge my fiath and love to you.
    I, Christina, take you, James, to be my lawfully wedded husband. I promise to love and honor you and to laugh and cry with you. I pledge my faith and love to you, through the good times and the bad.

    I also like what PP suggested. "With this ring . . ." 


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