XP MOH Toast Critique, Round 2! :)

Re: XP MOH Toast Critique, Round 2! :)

• southernbelle0915 mod

  

  June 2013

  Liatris2010 said:

  astimmel said:

  Ok, here's my second draft. Thoughts?

  "Hi, my name is *me* and *Bride*, you’ve has been my best friend pretty much since the 9^th grade when we sat in the back of Spanish class writing parodies to N Sync songs. Really at this point you’re more of a sister, and having you in my life all these years has truly been a gift. I love you, and it makes me so happy to know that you’ve found your other half. The way you and *groom* look at each other, the way you talk to each other, and about each other, leaves no doubt in my mind that the two of you will belong together and have a lifetime of happiness ahead of you. Here’s to *bride* and *groom*."

  My two cents, but very nice.
  

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• itzMS member

  

  June 2013

  I normally like to add or spin a brief compliment or comment directly to the groom too, but if you don't know him well obviously don't consider that.

  "Anthony, you have become a great friend to me as well."

  "Anthony always brings out the best in Julie"

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• astimmel member

  

  June 2013

  Thanks you guys!

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