Proof my invite wording please?

Re: Proof my invite wording please?

• misssunshine17 member

  

  August 2013

  You don't need a comma after December. Otherwise, looks good to me. Though I'm not a fan of honour. Unless you're 

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• nextrightthing member

  

  August 2013

  Thank you.  Yes, I was debating on using the british-looking spelling.  Hm. 

  

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• doeydo member

  

  August 2013 edited August 2013

  nextrightthing said:

  Hope no one minds.  The Invites and Paper board seems really slow.  Please help!

   

  Together with their families

  Nextrightthing

  and

  Mr. Nextrightthing

  request the honour of your presence

  at their marriage

  Saturday, the fourteenth of December

  two thousand thirteen 

  at half after ten o`clock in the morning

  The Church

  Address

  Dallas, Texas

   

   

  What am I missing?  Thanks!

   

  There.  Also, using the word "honour" is appropriate for your wedding at a church.  Also, "Bride``s Name and Groom's Name" is typically used for Jewish weddings where as "Brides Name to Groom`s Name`` is used for Christian wedding, but that`s kind of knit-picking.

  
  

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• libby2483 member

  

  August 2013 edited August 2013

  Together with their families
  Nextrightthing
  and
  Mr. Nextrightthing
  request the honour of your presence
  as they are united in marriage
  Saturday, the fourteenth of December
  two thousand thirteen 
  at half after ten o'clock in the morning
  The Church
  Address
  Dallas, Texas

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• NOLAbridealmost member

  

  August 2013

  I agree that it should be "half after 10" 

  
  

  
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