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Non GIS related - proof my invite?

bwils35bwils35 member
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Hey!

We are about to send our final proof back to be printed and was hoping for some proofreading :) suggestions are always welcome. It will be typed exactly as I have it.

Together with their families,

Brides Name
&
Grooms Name

request the pleasure of your company
as they are united in marriage

Sunday, the Seventeenth of November
Two thousand thirteen
At half past two in the afternoon

Venue Name
Address
City, State

Reception immediately to follow

____

I'm thinking capitals are off. We are not getting married in a church. Thoughts?

Thanks everyoneeee :)
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Re: Non GIS related - proof my invite?

  • lovelyheatherlovelyheather member
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    You might want to post this to the invites board.  I posted mine over there and they were very helpful.

    Together with their families

    Brides Name
    &
    Grooms Name

    request the pleasure of your company
    as they are united in marriage

    Sunday, the seventeenth of November
    two thousand thirteen
    at half past two in the afternoon

    Venue Name
    Address
    City, State

    Reception immediately to follow

    Based on the feedback I received, I took out the comma and changed a few letters to lower case.  They will probably say that "in the afternoon" is unnecessary as you obviously aren't getting married at 2:30 AM.  Though I could be wrong on that.
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  • bwils35bwils35 member
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    Hiiiiiii Kwith :)

    Thanks @lovelyheather - I'll post over there.. everyone is just so nice here. Hahaha :)
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  • GiaspoGiaspo member
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    @bwils35 - hi! I was going to say the exact same things that @lovelyheather did. We did my sister's invites last Saturday and specifically researched the caps for the date, and switched them to lower case. I second the comma and making the other caps lower-case too. Yay invites!
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  • ptrose13ptrose13
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    bwils35- our weddings are a day apart, that's awesome!!!
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  • bwils35bwils35 member
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    AHHH!!! @ptrose13 - Super exciting! I can't believe how close it is. I'm sure @mrsrutkowski and @jennylee813 said the same thing!!
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  • ptrose13ptrose13
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    I know!  @mrsrutkowski and @jennylee813- better you than me right now, I'm soooo not ready to be that close yet!  Best wishes ladies!!!  @bwils35, I can't believe how quick it is going, I'm in constant disbelief!  We can hang in there together :)
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  • mrsrutkowskimrsrutkowski member
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    ahh it is crazy!!! 
    This is what I'd do for your invite based on the feedback I got on mine. I changed a couple capitals and commas - 

    Together with their families

    Brides Name
    &
    Grooms Name

    request the pleasure of your company
    as they are united in marriage

    Sunday, the seventeenth of November
    two thousand thirteen
    at half past two 

    Venue Name 
    Address
    City, State

    Reception immediately to follow   (Should that say Reception to immediately follow? I didn't put this on mine because I have different locations so I had a reception card)
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  • NonosGirlNonosGirl member
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    Is it terrible that I am posting when I have no advice to offer? I was lurking because sometime in the near future I need to figure out our invites! This whole post just reminded me that I really need to be a bride and get some stuff marked off my check list. 
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  • bwils35bwils35 member
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    haha not at all :) I like people popping in to say hi:)
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  • PeachesNCream22PeachesNCream22 member
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    I think it looks good. What kind of invites are they? A lot will depend on the font, style, etc. But the edited text looks good to me!
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