Proofread my invitation?

Re: Proofread my invitation?

• CTYankeeBride member

  

  November 2013

  There shouldn't be an "and" in the year. It should read "two thousand fourteen." A good rule to remember this is money- "two thousand fourteen" is $2014.00, while "two thousand and fourteen" is $2000.14. Be sure the state's name is spelled out and not abbreviated.

  

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• doeydo member

  

  November 2013

  aefowler said:

  I'd love another set of eyes on our invitation & RSVP wording before we send it off. We are having a traditional wedding and my parents are hosting. Thank you!!
  
  Invitation:
  Mr. and Mrs. BridesParents
  request the honour of your presence 
  at the marriage of their daughter
  BrideFirst Middle
  to
  GroomFirst Middle Last
  
  Saturday, the twenty-sixth of April
  two thousand fourteen
  at five o'clock in the evening  (or just say "at five o'clock")
  
  Our Church name

  Church Address 
  City, State
  
  Reception to follow
  
  
  RSVP card:
  Kindly respond by the fifth of April
  M __________________________
  __ Accepts with pleasure
  __ Declines with regret
  

  I edited it a little

  
  

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