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One step closer to getting hitched...

Just over 3 months to go. I'm almost starting to get excited. (I said almost - I'd still rather elope!) I crossed one big item off my To Do list today by finishing the ceremony. One of our dear friends is getting ordained so she can marry us, and since she has her hands full with her children, her job, and putting her house on the market, I offered to do the leg-work of writing the ceremony so she would have something she could use as is or could add to/subtract from/tweak as she saw fit. I'm fairly happy with it. FI is thrilled with it. Since I've mostly been to church weddings, I have on idea if what I created is good or not. I basically found a bunch of ceremony scripts online and picked bits and pieces of each that I thought fit FI and I well. Does anyone want to give it a read-through and let me know if 1) it's intelligible (English is not my first language and I get too wordy sometimes) and 2) anything is missing from it? Thanks in advance.
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Re: One step closer to getting hitched...

  • Yay for being one step closer!  I'm happy to take a look (will PM you).
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  • Thank you! I sent you a link to the files. I swear, one of these days my brain will pick ONE language to think in so I don't have to second guess myself all the time!
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  • This means I only have 93 days left to convince FI we should wing off to Vegas and just get this over with! hehe
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  • I'm happy to take a look too!
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  • I just PMed you the link!
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  • That is an accomplishment!  We are doing the same thing and are just a little behind you in the process.  A friend is getting ordained to officiate, so we are piecing the ceremony together as well.  Right now, we have all the parts, and are fine tuning.  I am also starting on my vows, and kiddo and I co-wrote a poem: "The Makings of a Family" that she will read at the ceremony.

    If you need another pair of eyes, I would be happy to help.  :)
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  • I'm also happy to take a look if you want!
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    Same here, I can look it over too.
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  • I PMed each of you the link. I'm hoping to get this over to the officiant tonight so she can let me know if she wants any changes made. Thank you ladies so much!
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  • Awww Awesome!!! I can take a look too, if you still need another pair of eyes :)
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  • I'd also love to look over it for you! Congrats, that's a huge step :)


  • There are a lot of eyes looking over it already, but if you want one more pair I'm willing. A huge step towards being done - congratulations!
  • The more eyes the better. Seriously, I kept finding stupid little things every time I read over it - missing words, transposed words, missing punctuation. You'd think Spell Check would catch it all, but no suck luck. I sent you guys the link. Thank you so, so much!
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