Check my invitation wording?

Re: Check my invitation wording?

• ohannabelle member

  

  September 2014

  The only thing I'm catching is 

  vulpiepop said:

  Hi! Just making sure I got the wording right before I go ahead and order invitations! Any help would be appreciated!

  
  

  Mr. and Mrs. [brides parents]

  request the honor of your presence

  at the marriage of their daughter

  [bride's name]

  to
  

  [groom's name]

  Son of Mr. and Mrs. [groom's parents] (Groom's parents aren't traditionally included, unless they're hosting.)

  
  

  Monday, the ninth of March

  Two Thousand and Fifteen (Two thousand fifteen. No and. Written, "and" is a decimal point.)

  at twelve o'clock Noon (No "noon" is necessary. If you really prefer it, use "twelve o clock in the afternoon.")

  
  

  [ceremony address]

  Exciting! If I missed anything, I'm sure someone will catch it.

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• CMGragain member

  

  September 2014 edited September 2014

  This is the traditional wording for a CHURCH ceremony:
  
  

  Mr. and Mrs. [brides parents]

  request the honor of your presence

  at the marriage of their daughter

  [bride's name]

  to
  

  Mr.[groom's name]

  
  

  Monday, the ninth of March

  two thousand fifteen

  at twelve o'clock 
  
  

  Church Name  (Do not abbreviate "Saint")
  Address
  City, State
  
  If you really MUST list the groom's parents' names, do not capitalize "son of Mr. and Mrs. Groomsparents".  It is not traditional to list them unless they are hosting.
  
  

  

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• vulpiepop member

  

  September 2014

  Thank you both for your help! Yes, we're having a church wedding! I'll take off the groom's parents' names.

  
  

  

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