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Correct wording on invites?

littlepeplittlepep member
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First, my wedding isn't until July so I'm not quite ready to order invitations yet, but I wanted to go ahead and look at ideas since it took us a while to agree on STDs. I've been order some samples, but I wanted to check on the wording. Our wedding is outdoors and a bit more casual so I want to make sure the wedding is appropriate. Is this correct? Thanks for your help!

Together with their families 
Bride
&  
Groom  
invite you to celebrate their marriage
Saturday, July 11, 2015
at six thirty in the evening 
  
Venue Name
Venue Addresss • City, State 
Reception to Follow
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Re: Correct wording on invites?

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    crackktheskyycrackktheskyy member
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    I believe the correct wording would be as follows:

    Together with their families
    Bride's Full Name
    and
    Groom's Full Name
    request the pleasure of your company
    as they are united in marriage
    Saturday, the eleventh of July
    two thousand fifteen
    at half after six o'clock

    Venue Name
    City, State (omit zip code)

    Reception to follow (if your reception is indeed at the same place as the ceremony)


    Your current wording makes it unclear whether your guests are invited to the actual wedding where you are united in marriage, or a party after the fact to celebrate a wedding that has already taken place.

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    littlepeplittlepep member
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