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Checking my Wording?

I'm going to order my invites this week and wanted to check the wording one last time with unbiased Knotties :) My non-church ceremony and reception are at the same place with no gap.

INVITATION

Mr. & Mrs. Junebug's Parents and Mr. & Mrs. FI's Parents
request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of their children

Junebug
and
FI

Saturday, the twentieth of June, 2015
at five o'clock in the afternoon

Venue Name
Venue Address
Venue Town

reception to follow

RSVP CARD

Response

Name _____________

__ Accepts with pleasure     __ Declines with regret

__ Number attending


Entree Choice

__ Beef
__ Chicken
__ Trout
__ Vegetarian

kindly reply by the twenty-second of May

DETAILS CARD

Directions

*Airplane image*
Guests can fly into Airport 1 (x miles from venue) or Airport 2 in City 2 (y miles from venue).

*Car image*
[driving directions]

Accommodations

There are limited rooms available for guests to stay at [Venue]. 
Please reserve your room no later than May 22nd by calling 
[Venue phone number] and mentioning the Junebug wedding.

for other accommodation options or more information, 
visit our wedding website
www.junebugwedding.com

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Thoughts? As an aside, I really wanted to say "dinner and dancing to follow" but I just saw that the wording is not really etiquette-approved.

Re: Checking my Wording?

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    CMGragainCMGragain member
    First Anniversary First Comment First Answer 5 Love Its
    edited February 2015
    Mr. and Mrs. Junebug's Parents
    Mr. and Mrs. FI's Parents
    request the pleasure of your company
    at the marriage of

    Junebug
    and
    FI

    Saturday, the twentieth of June
    two thousand fifteen
    at five o'clock

    Venue Name
    Venue Address
    Venue Town, State

    Reception to follow

    ------------

    Please respond by the twenty-second of May.

    M _____________

    __ Accepts      __ Declines

    __ seats have been reserved in your honour.

    __Number attending.


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    Thanks for the input @CMGragain! I'll be ordering this week.
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