Wedding Invitations & Paper

Help proof-read?

NowIAmSypNowIAmSyp East Hanover, NJ member
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Hi All...

Could use a second set of eyes on my invite wording, and a little help, too.  My parents are generously hosting a majority of our wedding, with FI and I contributing the rest.  FI mentioned he wouldn't mind his parent's name on the invite, too, and since it's a victimless crime, and my parents don't care in the least, I told him sure.

But- his parents are separated.  They live separate lives, have their own SO's, but just haven't gotten around to the divorce yet.  They are totally amicable, and his mom hasn't changed her last name.  How do I put them on the invite??  Does the below look ok?

Thanks for your help- I appreciate the look-over :)

Mr. and Mrs. James Soontobesyp
request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of their daughter
Soontobesyp
to
Syp
son of Mr. Syp and Ms. Syp

Friday, the second of October
Two thousand and fifteen
at half past five o'clock

Venue
City, State
Reception to Follow 


Re: Help proof-read?

  • huskypuppy14huskypuppy14 Boston Suburbs member
    2500 Comments Fifth Anniversary 500 Love Its First Answer
    I think how you have your FIL listed is fine. Don't capitalize the two in two thousand fifteen. You don't need the "and" either.
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    NowIAmSyp
  • Mr. and Mrs. James Soontobesyp
    request the pleasure of your company
    at the marriage of their daughter
    Soontobesyp
    to
    Syp
    son of  Ms. Syp and Mr. Syp

    Friday, the second of October
    two thousand  fifteen
    at half after five o'clock

    Venue
    City, State
    Reception to follow
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    NowIAmSyp
  • NowIAmSypNowIAmSyp East Hanover, NJ member
    Fifth Anniversary 500 Love Its 500 Comments First Answer
    Thank you to both :)  Appreciate the help!
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