I need some help checking my wording on the invitation. My FMIL thought it "sounds funny" so I've come up with some basics and just need to figure out how to handle it.
Together with their families (we want to include them, but don't want to list the names)
Jane Mary Doe & John Joseph Doe
invite you to share in the joy and
celebration of their marriage.
Saturday, the fourteenth of May (Do I have to say Saturday? Can I just say May fourteenth? Write out the numbers? )
two thousand and sixteen
at half-past four o’clock (is this correct? Should it be before the date?)
XYZ Venue
XYZ city, MA
Dinner, Dancing and Merriment to Follow (ceremony and reception are at the same venue)
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Separate issue is the RSVP card. We're having a buffet (plenty of options etc) but our caterer said we should find out about any dietary restrictions (allergies, etc) so they can plan for those. We know some people have these already, but what about people we don't know about? Should we put a line on the RSVP card?