So we aren't ultra-formal/traditional people, but I just found out that my dad feels strongly about including his and my mom's names on the invitations. Does this wording seem okay? I know it's a bit different than the standard wording. (Details have been changed)
David Dawson and Jennifer Fitzhammer
warmly invite you to join them as
are joined in marriage
two thousand seventeen
at six o’clock in the evening
1051 North Second Street
Dinner and dancing to follow
I know the "dinner and dancing" thing is controversial, but I think it is important to explain the level of hosting because a small number of our guests are farmers who tend to eat early and may think of 6:00 as being after dinner time.
Anything I should change?