wording help

vmj23

TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES,

 xxx & xxx

REQUEST THE HONOR OF YOUR PRESENCE

WHEN THEY EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS

 

OR AS THEY EXCHANGE MARRIAGE VOWS?

 

Or do you have another suggestion for the line after request the honor of your presence?

 

vmj23

and one more question

 

currently I have the reception enclosure written as:

THE CELEBRATION CONTINUES!
 
PLEASE JOIN US FOR A
Reception, Dinner & Dance
FOLLOWING THE CEREMONY

 

But my mom thinks instead of immediately to follow, I should put a specific time (in case someone can't get to the ceremony...it's on a Friday at 4).  Suggests how to word it while still making it should good? 

CMGragain

TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES,

 xxx and xxx

REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE

AS THEY ARE UNITED IN MARRIAGE

DAY, DATE

TIME O'CLOCK

CHURCH NAME

ADDRESS

CITY, STATE

RECEPTION  TO FOLLOW

This is correct if your reception is taking place in the church.  If it is not, then you need a reception card.  The reception card should not describe the entertainment and food, so no "dinner and dancing".  I dislike all caps fonts.  JMHO.  If your ceremony is not taking place in a church, then you should "request the pleasure of your company".

RECEPTION

TIME

VENUE NAME

ADDRESS

CITY, STATE

 

vmj23

ceremony is at a church.  the reception enclosure came worded like that with the template I purchased, but I can edit it.