I am applying for this position, and I would like some feedback on my cover letter (I feel it is a bit long, and would like feedback on what seems out of place or redundant):
To whom it may concern, I am writing to confirm my interest for your position of Program Manager, Employee Recognition with Princess Cruises. I noticed this position listed on your website and I would be a successful addition to your team. My 9 years of customer service and management experience began at one of the top 25 Charlotte Russe locations. This $2M per year location allowed me to design new customer service training tools and develop the skills of all employees including management, sales, and visual teams. My opportunity at Guess Accessories (a quickly up-and-coming new concept by the Guess by Marciano brand) allowed me to travel from California to Florida assisting with new staff hiring and training; location set up and development; as well as designing and launching sales incentive programs. At Sunglass Hut, I set my focus on taking an active role in their non-profit sectors (OneSight Vision North America) and was a major contributor towards promoting the largest national growth of this program through associate training and motivation. Steve Madden has given me the platform in which to utilize my strengths in a Human Resources and Operations Management capacity and I have shown that I am a strong force in ensuring a high focus on customer service, business growth, and maintaining profitability through motivation and employee recognition. I am looking for a company that will allow me to utilize my own strengths in a Human Resources and Operations capacity full time. My passion is in the people: training and motivation is the foundation of any successful business and I would love the opportunity to grow with Princess Cruises. Attached you will find my resume, which also includes all of my current contact information. I look forward to your consideration in this position,
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