Would you ladies mind reading through my invitation language and give me your thoughts? I don't like the traditional formal language since that's not how we are or how we want our wedding to be. I'm wanting something fun. My fiance and I are hosting; however, our parents will probably be assisting hosts so we do want to include them in the language somehow. One of the things we loved about this venue was that between our outdoor wedding and reception, while we're taking photos our guests get a tour!
Because your love
and friendship have made us who we are
And because you
enjoy good wine, beer and celebratory foolery as much as we do…
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Me and Him, along with our loving parents,
Would love for you
to join them at their garden party wedding
For a whimsically
reverent celebration of love and adventure
As we vow to each
other a lifetime of mischief and adventures together.
Date
Location and address
Ceremony begins at
5:30pm
Tour the
Mansion after the Ceremony
Dinner begins at
7:00pm
Dinner will be
followed by general merriment, a bonfire, and awkward but enthusiastic dancing!