Please Give You Opinion On Invite Wording

jhawkins313

Hi all

We are having a destination wedding, inviting only family. . matter of fact, I only needed 6 invites. 
We rented a cabin in the Smoky Mountains. We will be married outside, with a dinner in the cabin afterward. It's not "formal" per-se, although I will wear a wedding dress and the mothers will wear dresses, men tuxes, etc . . for wedding and photo purposes. 
Anyway, I want the wording to be awesome - as any bride does. Please tell me what you think of this wording:

Me & Future Hubby
joyfully request 
the pleasure of your comany
as we are joined in holy matrimony
Saturday, date
at six o'clock
at the cabin location


Also, where should the wedding website be written on the invite? A separate card? Or at the bottom of the invite itself? 
The website is where all of the destination, accomodation, directions, maps, events, etc. info will be. 

huskypuppy14

I would recommend changing the wording to:

The pleasure of your company is requested at the marriage of jhawkins and husband...

I think invitations are not supposed to be in the first person.

CMGragain

When the bride and groom are hosting their own wedding, etiquette says that they do not directly invite guests.  The invitation should be worded in the passive tense.  Like this:

The pleasure of your company is requested
at the marriage of
Bride's Full Name
and
Groom's Full Name
Saturday, the (date)
at six o'clock
Venue
City, State

Reception to follow

(Separate card) For more information, please see the wedding website, http://www.theknot.com/bride&groom(etc.)

jhawkins313

Thanks you guys!

jhawkins313

The Pleasure of Your Company is Requested 
At The Marriage of 

Jill Future Mrs
and 
My Soul Mate

Saturday, the Eleventh of October
at six o'clock in the evening
Cabin Name
Cabin Address
City, State, Zip

Dinner to follow

Response cards:
Kindly reply by
September 20
Name
Accepts with Pleasure
Declines with Regret

Extra Card Will Say:

Please visit our wedding information website at:

ww.ourwedding.com

for important details, directions, and timelines

You guys think that is OK? Should I change anything? Also, should the state name be spelled out like "Michigan" or is "MI" acceptable? 

Jen4948

Don't capitalize every single word in the lines "The pleasure of your company is requested" and "Saturday, the eleventh of October" and spell out the word "Michigan."

Aside from that, they look fine.

jhawkins313

OK, thanks ! 

It doesn't matter how many sites I look at, it seems I can never find the right info. Thank heaven for you ladies!  

CMGragain

The pleasure of your company is requested 
at the marriage of 

Jill Future Mrs
and 
My Soul Mate

Saturday, the eleventh of October
at six o'clock in the evening
Cabin Name
Cabin Address
City, State

Reception to follow

Response cards:
Kindly reply by September 20th
Name
Accepts
Declines



Zip codes NEVER go on invitations.  They are only for the outer envelope!
"Dinner to follow" is incorrect.  People will assume that there will be dinner after a 6:00 PM ceremony.  Use the traditional "Reception to follow."
I have made many correction with lower case letters.