Wedding Invitations & Paper

Check my wording?

Together with their families

Ckel24

and

Ckel24's fiancé

Request the pleasure of your company

As they are united in marriage


Saturday, the twenty-seventh of September

Two thousand and fourteen

At half after six o'clock


Knapp Winery

Romulus, New York


Reception to follow

Re: Check my wording?

  • Jen4948Jen4948 member
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    You don't need to capitalize "request," "as," or "at."  Also, you should include the address of Knapp Winery.  Aside from those things, it looks good.
  • Thank you!
  • Together with their families

    Ckel24

    and

    Ckel24's fiancé

    request the pleasure of your company

    as they are united in marriage


    Saturday, the twenty-seventh of September

    two thousand and fourteen

    at half after six o'clock


    Knapp Winery

    Romulus, New York


    Reception to follow

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  • Thanks @CMGragain! In your opinion, should I include the address for the venue?
  • It is optional.  Can people find it with a GPS?   Is it hard to find?  It's up to you.
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  • "two thousand fourteen" not "two thousand AND fourteen"
  • Mitch617 said:
    "two thousand fourteen" not "two thousand AND fourteen"
    This is not really decided yet. Different etiquette gurus give differing opinions on this, so I usually don't bother to correct it.  I, personally, prefer the year without the "and", but that it only my personal opinion.
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  • edited May 2014
    I also agree no "and" in the year. As for the address for the winery, personally, I'd add it in. Edited for spelling.
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