Invitation Wording- Opinions wanted!

fallbride57

I am getting ready to order our invitations and response cards.  Our wedding is November 15, 2014 in San Diego, and all guests will be coming from out of town.  Our STDs went out in April.  I included the address for our wedding website on the STD, which includes hotel information, ceremony/ reception location, etc.  Our ceremony and reception are at the same location.  The ceremony starts at 6pm, cocktail hour from 6:30-7:30, and dinner reception begins at 7:30.  The RSVP date is 5 weeks before the wedding for planning purposes (How many tables, centerpieces, costs, etc).  Please let me know what you think of the wording on the invites and RSVP cards.  Also, should I include another insert with our website again?  Thank you much!
Together with their parents(Brides Name)And(Grooms Name)request the honour of your presenceat their marriageon Saturday, November fifteenthTwo thousand and fourteenat six o'clock in the evening(Name of Venue) (Venue Address)San Diego, California  The response cards will say:Please respond on or beforethe eleventh of OctoberWe reserved ___ seats in your honourName(s) of Guest(s) attending:

Maggie0829

zervanbr said:

I am getting ready to order our invitations and response cards.  Our wedding is November 15, 2014 in San Diego, and all guests will be coming from out of town.  Our STDs went out in April.  I included the address for our wedding website on the STD, which includes hotel information, ceremony/ reception location, etc.  Our ceremony and reception are at the same location.  The ceremony starts at 6pm, cocktail hour from 6:30-7:30, and dinner reception begins at 7:30.  The RSVP date is 5 weeks before the wedding for planning purposes (How many tables, centerpieces, costs, etc).  Please let me know what you think of the wording on the invites and RSVP cards.  Also, should I include another insert with our website again?  Thank you much!
Together with their parents(Brides Name)Aand(Grooms Name)request the honour of your presence pleasure of your companyat their marriage weddingon Saturday, November the fifteenth of NovemberTwo thousand and fourteenat six o'clock in the evening(Name of Venue) (Venue Address)San Diego, CaliforniaReception to follow  The response cards will say:The favor of a reply is requestedPlease respond on or before by the eleventh of Octoberthe eleventh of OctoberWe have reserved ___ seats in your honourName(s) of Guest(s) attending ____________________________________________________________________________  Accepts with pleasure___  Declines with regrets