One more proof request!

sarawifenow

Ok, so we finally settled on an invitation and I just got my proof. Will you please check over the wording and let me know what you think?

TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES

me

AND

fi

REQUEST THE PLEASURE OF YOUR COMPANY

AT THE CELEBRATION OF THEIR MARRIAGE

 

SATURDAY, THE EIGHTEENTH OF OCTOBER

TWO THOUSAND FOURTEEN

AT ELEVEN THIRTY IN THE MORNING

 

LOCATION

ADDRESS

CITY, STATE

reception to follow

Jen4948

Please don't put it in all caps.  Especially on the Internet, that's the equivalent of shouting.

Also, the wording "the celebration of their marriage" suggests that the wedding already took place and this is a later celebration.  If this is actually a wedding invitation, use the wording "as they are united in marriage" instead.

sarawifenow

The reaspon I put it in all caps is because the font is in all caps. I was trying to get it as similar as possible.

 

Thank you for the suggestions!

CMGragain

TOGETHER WITH THEIR FAMILIES

me

AND

fi

REQUEST THE PLEASURE OF YOUR COMPANY

AS THEY ARE UNITED IN MARRIAGE

 

SATURDAY, THE EIGHTEENTH OF OCTOBER

TWO THOUSAND FOURTEEN

AT HALF AFTER ELEVEN O'CLOCK

 

LOCATION

ADDRESS

CITY, STATE

RECEPTION TO FOLLOW

JennyColada

You are getting the same month as me, and I'm already too super eager on getting invites.

STOP BEING A BAD INFLUENCE ON ME. :P

sarawifenow

Thanks ladies!

@JennyColada-you can always order them now and just address them a little at a time. That is what I am doing so it doesn't get overwhelming as we get closer.

JennyColada

We're only inviting 6 people though (4 invites).

But I've been having fun designing lots of invites and showing them to Fi. At least he humors me and smiles and says "it's nice" at them all!