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Wedding Invitations & Paper

Please check my wording

Mr. and Mrs. Thomas Smith Sr.
request the honor of your presence 
at the marriage of their daughter
Susan Diane 
to
Jacob Brown Jr.
son of
Mr. and Mrs. Jacob Brown Sr.
Saturday, the third of November
two thousand and fifteen
four o'clock in the afternoon
Shiloh Missionary Baptist Church
1350 Northwest 95th Street
Miami, Florida 33147

Re: Please check my wording

  • CMGragainCMGragain member
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    edited May 2015
    Mr. and Mrs. Thomas Smith, senior
    request the honor of your presence 
    at the marriage of their daughter
    Susan Diane 
    to
    Mr. Jacob Brown, junior
    Saturday, the third of November
    two thousand fifteen
    at four o'clock
    Shiloh Missionary Baptist Church
    1350 Northwest Ninety-fifth Street
    Miami, Florida

    Suffixes like junior and senior should be written out in full, lower case with a comma separating the suffix from the rest of the name.  The groom's parents do not belong on the invitation unless they are hosting.  The "son of" line is not traditional.  You can put it in if you insist, but it really doesn't belong there.  "in the afternoon" is not necessary.  People know you wedding is not at 2:00 AM.  Never put a zip code on a wedding invitation.  Zip codes are for the outer envelope, only!
    Hope this helps.
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  • Thanks, you are a lifesaver!
  • One extra note, it probably should be "Ninety-fifth  Street".
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