XP - My Invitation Suite Advice/Proofing?

PJS001

Hi everybody, so attached is my invitation suite. I made it 100% by myself and am actually really freakin' proud. I am hoping that you ladies will offer me any advice or proofing of the following images.

Thank you sooooo much.

JosieMarie00

Looooooove it!!   

banks69

Absolutely LOVE it!

Only one thing:  I would suggest removing the line, "the celebration takes place at" on your reception card.  The first sentence inviting them to the reception should suffice.

HTH

akg0053

The celebration takes place at needs to be taken off, but other than that I think it's great.

TXsun

looks great. only suggestion is to change how you word the time. you have Half after One.. half past One sounds better I think.

PJS001

I had "half past one", then someone on the Invite board said it should say "half after one"... Now I am doubting them, because I think half past one sounds better since it breaks up the similiar sounds of the word...

Hmmm.