Eloping in 3 weeks! Vows???

sfcityhallwedding

May 28, 2011.  The day we met.  June 3, 2011. Our first date.  June 24, 2011.  The day you fell in love with me.  July 1, 2011.  The day I fell in love with you.  June 29, 2012.  The day we started living as a family.  September 22, 2012.  The day you committed to one day marrying me.  October 4, 2012.  The day you proposed and the day I said YES!

To you my love I promise to always love you, even when you whistle.  I promise to always treat you with respect, even when you take a 30 minute shower.  I promise to always be passionate with our love, even when you have bad gas.  I promise to always have your back, even when you have too many Patron shots.  I promise to be the best mom I can be to all of our children.  ALL 6 OF THEM.  When am I getting that nanny again? 

You are my rock, my shoulder to cry on, my nurse when I’m sick, my maid when I leave my shoes all over the house.  I can’t remember what life was like without you and I never want to.  You are my life, my world, my ever after. 

Today.  November 2, 2012.  Our wedding day.  The day I marry my soulmate, lover, best friend, my honeybee.  Now let’s go before we are late!

All my love.  All of me.

JoanE2012

In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/special-topic-wedding-boards_vows_eloping-in-3-weeks-vows?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Special Topic Wedding BoardsForum:24Discussion:4b93c605-6e05-4acb-9804-a6a38d86c0b9Post:65f47c60-779e-48c7-b0ab-6eb306a1c6a8">Eloping in 3 weeks! Vows???</a>:
[QUOTE]May 28, 2011.   The day we met.   June 3, 2011. Our first date.   June 24, 2011.   The day you fell in love with me.   July 1, 2011.   The day I fell in love with you.   June 29, 2012.   The day we started living as a family.   September 22, 2012.   The day you committed to one day marrying me.   October 4, 2012.   The day you proposed and the day I said YES! To you my love I promise to always love you, even when you whistle.   I promise to always treat you with respect, even when you take a 30 minute shower.  <strong> I promise to always be passionate with our love, even when you have bad gas.</strong>   I promise to always have your back, even when you have too many Patron shots.   I promise to be the best mom I can be to all of our children.   ALL 6 OF THEM.   When am I getting that nanny again?   You are my rock, my shoulder to cry on, my nurse when I’m sick, my maid when I leave my shoes all over the house.   I can’t remember what life was like without you and I never want to.   You are my life, my world, my ever after.   Today.   November 2 , 2012.   Our wedding day.   The day I marry my soulmate, lover, best friend, my honeybee.   Now let’s go before we are late! All my love.   All of me.
Posted by sfcityhallwedding[/QUOTE]

I would take out that line.  It just sounds weird and uncomfortable, not funny.

sfcityhallwedding

Too late.  We are leaving Thu and they are already written but thanks for your reply. 

tiny speck

What was the point of posting this then, if you didn't want feedback? I too would skip that line.

Flumose

I know your already married! But still wanted to say I wouldn't change anything...!!! It was cute. It may not have been funny to anybody else but vows are for and your fianc anyway!!!!

Flumose

You and your fianc