Okay, so I already B&M'd about my photo situation. I'm working on a letter to my photographer, and I'd like your opinions, because let's face it, you ARE the wedding authority

Also, sorry for being a post-whore today - but I really need you ladies now!
(Not sure if it matters, but I paid $1,800 for e-pics and the wedding day, plus travel, and that is supposed to include a $450 print credit towards albums. That's not that much in DFW terms, but she's from a small town, and I got married in a small town, so that makes a bit of a difference money-wise. Just throwing that tidbit in there.)
So here's my letter so far. There are a few blanks, because I don't know what exactly to put there.
I am very dissatisfied with the coloring in the photos, and I am sure that there is something can be done to correct this situation. I feel like after waiting five weeks for my photos, they should have been perfect... Photography was the most important element of my wedding, because after that day, the photos are what you have to remember the day by. Instead, all the time and effort (not to mention money) that went into planning a cohesive theme for my wedding feels wasted, because the photos of my wedding day look nothing like I had planned.
I've talked to a few people who have told me that the color can be corrected in Photoshop, but it's a fairly labor-intensive and costly process because it has to be done photo by photo. If this is not something that you are capable of doing, I feel that you should outsource it to someone who can, and the cost of this process should be your responsibility. As a compromise, I am willing to go through and pick out my favorites to be corrected, rather than correcting all the images, as I know that would be extremely expensive.
Also, I would like to have the photos corrected in a timely manner, so that I can have albums, etc. made. I feel that _________ is a reasonable date to have this accomplished.
If you cannot or will not outsource the corrections by the date above, then I would like a refund of _______ so that I may take the photos to someone who can correct them for me. This amount represents ___________.
I have really enjoyed working with you, and I feel that your work overall - including my wedding photos - is really great, with the exception of this color issue. I'm sure that we can work this out so that when I look back on my wedding day, I remember it exactly how it was - just perfect.