I don't like most of the invitation text I've seen so far, and want to do something like this (btw, my fi and I are hosting the wedding, which will be an informal, outdoor affair):
Simchas are for Sharing!
Dorie Last Name and Ron Last Name joyfully ask you to join them as they exchange wedding vows under the chuppah.
Is that opening line too hokey? And, I'm not sure if the idea of "wedding vows" is kosher for a Jewish wedding ... your thoughts? I shouldn't be obsessing about this, but I am.
All ideas very much appreciated
Dorie G