So I would like some constructive criticism. Is there something that should be changed, taken out? Does it flow right? Let me know and TIA!
When we first met, we became instant friends. We just...clicked!
When we started dating, it was us against the world.
We didn't care what anyone thought of us.
Back then, we had no idea that our lives would end up like this.
But even then, I knew you were special.
Today, I am pledging my life and all of my love to you.
I promise to encourage you, to inspire you,
to laugh with you, and to cry with you.
I promise to be there when you need me,
to fill your days with happiness and excitement.
I promise to love you when life seems easy and when it's hard,
when our love is simple, and when it can be an effort.
I promise to cherish you, and to always hold you in the highest regard.
I promise to help you reach your goals and to be your best friend.
And, most of all, I promise to love you, for all of my life, with all of my heart.
For Sale BioUpdated 10/4/10
