Does this look sloppy?

sweet_melissa81

Does this look sloppy. I put about an hour into this and I'm not sure if it's good enough to actually use. What do you guys think?

amonis

i think it's super cute!!! 

Bejohnson5

Absolutely not! I love it!

Zimsgirl26

Looks great!

MMRoberts11

Looks good. 

I'm doing mad libs for my RSVP cards.  Here's mine (it's pretty similar to yours):

sweet_melissa81

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[QUOTE]Looks good.  I'm doing mad libs for my RSVP cards.  Here's mine (it's pretty similar to yours):
Posted by MMRoberts11[/QUOTE]

That's so cute!

Ash61612

I think it looks great

aor9487

Oh my goodness. This is absolutely adorable and a great idea! Not sloppy at all and now I wished I would've thought of something like this lol

Shanee18

Very cute!  I bet you will get some seriously awesome (and inappropriate) responses!  Hahaha.

SoSaysTara

Nope! I love it.  I also am doing Mad Lib response cards like a PP.. Here's MINE.

Carebear62584

I think it looks great but have one suggestion.  You ask for your guests name at the top and at the bottom.  I think you should only include it once. Maybe you could change the top one to "As Melissa and Jonathan's _______(relationship to couple)..." or something along those lines.  I was going to do Mad Libs and send them out with the invitations but it just got to be too much so I scrapped it. 

melntaitt

Too cute!

Kfudge0714

I've actually never seen this before!! and its absolutely not sloppy! its looks great! I'm with Shannon, you are definitely going to get some inappropriate responses! haha ... make sure you share them!

chelseakopperud

that is SOOO cute!!!