Please proof read

rowenac82

Hello Ladies...Hope you are enjoying your weekend. 

I have a vista print group on that expires in the next week or so. So I decided to get my menus done. If you ladies could please proof read this for me and share any comments about format, that would be great! TIA

rowenac82

tirathemrs

ummmmm i read it and now im hungry lol thanks....but it looks good to me

CreoleBride30

Menu Looks good and sounds appetizing. I recommend changing the "Bread Baskets Filled" to just "Bread Basket Filled" take the "s" off of "baskets" since each person will have a menu. It should be singular and not plural...well, unless of course, each table or person will have more than one bread basket. 

rowenac82

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[QUOTE]Menu Looks good and sounds appetizing. I recommend changing the "Bread Baskets Filled" to just "Bread Basket Filled" take the "s" off of "baskets" since each person will have a menu. It should be singular and not plural...well, unless of course, each table or person will have more than one bread basket. 
Posted by CreoleBride30[/QUOTE]

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</div><div>Good point! The chef gave me the wording but I see your point...</div>

CreoleBride30

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[QUOTE]Menu Looks good and sounds appetizing. I recommend changing the "Bread Baskets Filled" to just "Bread Basket Filled" take the "s" off of "baskets" since each person will have a menu. It should be singular and not plural...well, unless of course, each table or person will have more than one bread basket. 
Posted by CreoleBride30[/QUOTE]

<div>LOL! I do want to state that no one else will probably even notice that if you decide not to change it. I am just one that notice that type of stuff....I'm a stickler for those types of things...guess I have no life LOL</div>

rowenac82

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[QUOTE]In Response to Re: Please proof read : LOL! I do want to state that no one else will probably even notice that if you decide not to change it. I am just one that notice that type of stuff....I'm a stickler for those types of things...guess I have no life LOL
Posted by CreoleBride30[/QUOTE]

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</div><div>It's definitely a good thing when it comes to wedding planning. I made an error on my save the dates and my invitations. I didn't reprint the save the dates but my invites had to be reprinted. So it helps to be critical! Trust me!</div>

CreoleBride30

So True!

nicknuttnc

I am hungry for real now....

RealHappyGal

food sounds good

[Deleted User]

hi luvies.

sorry for being a pain in the ass, but unless Sweet Whip is the name of the brand, the adjective describing the butter rosettes is meant to read "whipped".   on the bridal richter scale of shyt everybody remembers, it's like a negative 2, but i'd notice it.