direction card wording help please!

desi2002

I dont have enough room to put the "all routes" part 3 times, so I only put it once at the end. If you were reading this, would you be confused?

Directions the proud bird1102 aviation blvdlos Angeles California  From the 91 West merge onto the 605 north, merge onto 105 west  From the 60 West merge onto 215 north, continue on 60 westmerge onto 605 south, merge onto 105 west  From the 10 West  merge onto 605 south, merge onto 105 west  All Routes take exit toward la cienega turn left at west imperial hwy take first right onto aviation blvd

desi2002

okay the formatting is all messed up, hopefully you can read it still

csuperstar02

I think it makes sense. You could take out 'the' in each highway line: "from 10 west"


and if you're worried, you could just add 'from 105 West' to the all routes section directions.

mrswac58

Sounds good to me. Im from LA and i love that place. The food is so good!!

PP- it's funny you suggested to take out "the" because everyone I know from other states, get on me for sayin "the 405,the 91,etc" It must be a Cali thing.lol

eagles347

I think I'd get it, but it would make me wonder why you didn't just put all routes first then the three different directions.

eagles347

Never mind me...I reread it and I get it.

lil01

I get it & I think its fine.

The only suggestion I give is after "All Routes", you could put "from 105 west". So it'll say: "All Routes from 105 West".