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Offbeat Weddings

Invite Wording

So FI wanted boxing poster-style invites, and we designed them, they're good to go.

However, I'm worried some people (like his almost-90 grandparents) might be a little confused by the layout, so I'm designing a second invitation to go with it (overkill maybe, but eh bien).  I just want to see if the wording conveys 'wedding' to you.

You are cordially invited to join
Me
and
FI
for an evening of love, laughter and general merriment
as they celebrate their commitment to each other.

And then date/time/place/yada yada

The bolded part is what I mostly want feedback on.  Does it sound like a wedding, or something else?
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