RSVP Help!!!

NZbride2011

Hey ladies.  I need help.  We are having a non-traditional RSVP response card.  Instead of the "mail-back" type, we are just having one that asks for all of the guests to RSVP online on the website.  But I'm having issues w/ the wording.  I could really use you ladies right now.  Here is what I have right now, but I don't know.  It doesn't feel right.  TIA ladies!!!!!

We look forward to celebrating with you!

 Kindly respond by September 1

 

As we prepare to celebrate,

Our hearts are full of joy,

Whether you accept with pleasure,

Or decline with regret,

We ask that you respond through our website:

www.mikeandleslie2011.com

Password: ~~~~~~~~

ehlerss

I really like what you have already.  I think it sounds really nice and is easy to understand.  Maybe you should include a respond by date somewhere in it?

NZbride2011

It is, just the top two lines.  Mike and my mom both really like it too.  I guess I'm just nervous.

breaness

I think it's great. Is there anyone in your family who isn't tech savvy and may not be able to RSVP online?

Kayla&Brian412

I like it too!  I think its sweet and to the point and not confusing!  I think you're just nervous, I was the same way with my invites/rsvps, but once I had them in hand, I fell in love!

NZbride2011

The only person not "on-line" in my mother's mom.  My other grandparents are online all the time, so not a problem.  Along w/ postal addresses, we've actually collected everyone's email addresses as well.  And we already have over 20 "yes" RSVP's on the Website, so we're not too worried.  And thanks ladies.  I appreciate the input.