October 2012 Weddings

Can we talk about wording?

I found handmade invitations on Etsy that I love and I am going to purchase a digital sample.  I am trying to work out the wording.  Has anyone done this already and would you mind sharing a sample? 

I'm thinking of starting with

"Together with their families
ME &
FIANCE
request the honor of your presence at their wedding"

Pretty standard and formal right? 
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