I am printing the invites - we have printed all of the invites, addressed all of the invites (except four we are still waiting for emails re: addresses), we have printed all the response cards, and now I am just finishing up the last couple inserts. One of the inserts is what I am having trouble with....
My FI and I are hosting a welcome dinner on the day before our wedding instead of a rehearsal dinner. I am including an extra insert with the invitation since we are inviting all of our guests.
So far it reads:
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Welcome Dinner
Please join
[Bride] and [Groom]
along with their families
for an autumn cookout
on the eve of their
wedding day
[date]
[time]
[address]
[city,state]
b.y.o.b.
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Do you like this wording? How would you change it?
ETA: Fixed typo in post title
74 Invited

44

are ready to party!
31

declines
0

can't find the bleeping mailbox
RSVP Date: Sept 24