October 2012 Weddings

Welcome Dinner / Invite Progress

I am printing the invites - we have printed all of the invites, addressed all of the invites (except four we are still waiting for emails re: addresses), we have printed all the response cards, and now I am just finishing up the last couple inserts. One of the inserts is what I am having trouble with.... 

My FI and I are hosting a welcome dinner on the day before our wedding instead of a rehearsal dinner. I am including an extra insert with the invitation since we are inviting all of our guests. 

So far it reads:

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Welcome Dinner

Please join
[Bride] and [Groom]
along with their families
for an autumn cookout
on the eve of their 
wedding day

[date]
[time]

[address]
[city,state]

b.y.o.b. 

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Do you like this wording? How would you change it? 

ETA: Fixed typo in post title
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