Proof my invites, please?

had26

Good morning all!  I was hoping you could look over my invite for me?  I've looked at it a few times now and feel that all of the wording should be uniform (some is in lower case, some in upper, etc.).  Thoughts?  Thanks so my wonderful maid of honor for doing these invites.  I love them.

mrshall1027

This is how I would lay it out:

Together with their families

Heather A.

and

Francis D.

request the honor of your presence

as they are united in marriage

Saturday, the Twenty Seventh of October

Two Thousand Twelve

Three o’clock in the afternoon

 

Also, "in the afternoon" isn't necessary since no one would assume 3am

Bryan&AmyC

What a pretty invitation! I agree with PP's changes and I'd also spell out Pennsylvania, instead of writing PA.

shoebie

I would center the text but other then that and pp suggestions looks good

had26

Thanks, gals!  I've been staring at this thing for days now and wasn't sure if I was going nuts with the inconsistencies. 

So glad to knock one more thing off the list!