please proof my invitation:)

kimm260

Thanks for your advice and suggestions!!
Do you think there is too much space at the top?

snuff9861

I would move the writing up a tad to balance out the top and bottom. Other than that it looks good.

mrshall1027

It looks good and I agree that it should be moved up a bit for evening out the spacing.  The only thing I noticed about the wording is I think it should say "half after four" as I've heard that half past is reserved for funerals.

brainybrunette

I agree with both pps. Also, since your wedding is not in a church, I would use "request the pleasure of your company" since honour of your presence is usually used for church ceremonies. Other than that it looks good : )

achiduck

Ditto Nic about pleasure vs. honour. 

Also, you don't need 'at' in the time line.

kimm260

Thanks for all of you suggestions!!!!! 
 I actually knew about the two ediquette wordings,  (half after, and pleasure of your company) but FI said let's try it that way. lol
They have been fixed and we moved up the top wording a bit "together with their families'  I wish we could move up the white space with our names but alas we cannot.