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Invitation Wording

Hey Ladies. I need your help again! How is this wording for the invitations? Or should I cut it short and say something along the lines of today is the day I will marry my best friend? So more than likely we will have appetizers as food (no formal sit down lunch), and I want to make sure they know, how should i put it and where?

Each hour, each day, each year
we grow as two, yet as onewe grow apart, yet togetherforming an eternal Love.together with our parents we,Stephany Sanchez&Steven Yanes Invite you in the celebration of our Marriagesunday, the twenty-seventh of Marcheleven o’clock in the morningpinecrest gardens11000  red road
miami, florida

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Re: Invitation Wording

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    anaroo87anaroo87 member
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    edited December 2011
    hmmm ... why   "yet as one we grow apart"  ?
    I like how it begins with "each hour, each day, each year .. but I'm not sure if the next parts really flow together. Maybe something like:
    With each hour, each day, each year that passed
    An eternal love grew that would forever last.

    As for making sure people know it is not a sit-sown lunch,
    You can end it simply with "Appetizer Reception to Follow"
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    edited December 2011
    LOL I dk, it was the wording I found online, but yea I wondered about that too, thanx =)
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    twinkle82576twinkle82576 member
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    edited December 2011
    I agree with what Anna said. What you posted seemed a little garbled to me. GL!
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    edited December 2011
    totally agree with anna.... :)
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