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invitation mockup! [link in post]

hey ladies!!! so i made a little invite mockup, and i'd love some feedback! here is the link to the pics: http://tinyurl.com/yl5tt2p a few things: - i know the envelope writing isn't centered lol...it was my first try, and i didnt want to waste too many envelopes on a mockup, so the final ones will be centered :) - the pocketfold and dark writing are both dark brown, it just sometimes looks black. - the food choices will be more elaborate once we figure that part out, so the cherry blossoms on that card might be out, which means i'll probably take out the cherry blossoms on the website card too, so it's not the only insert with cherry blossoms on it. i think that's it! let me know what you think! thanks!!!! :D
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Re: invitation mockup! [link in post]

  • edited December 2011
    I love them!
  • devinandheididevinandheidi member
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    edited December 2011
    are you going to put the city and state on the address line? just wondering. love the zip code style! that's quite the map lady! love the fonts and the ribbon band. very very nice Jac!!!
  • KT82KT82 member
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    edited December 2011
    I love your invitation! great job :)
  • KayH23KayH23 member
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    edited December 2011
    Simply gorgeous!! Love them lady :) They would even look FAB if that was black!
  • lpolly12lpolly12 member
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    edited December 2011
    They look gorgeous! I love them :)
  • l337Jacquil337Jacqui member
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    edited December 2011
    thanks guys!!! as for the address line, yeah, i think i'm going to have it be just 3 lines like that. i tried 4 lines, and it just doesnt look as nice? like, it's more of a big block, and the rag lines dont look as nice do you think that font will be okay for addressing the envelopes? i just adore it so much! i think it makes it look so formal with the font/layout on the envelope like that, but i worry that the postmen will throw a fit because they dont want to take longer than 2 seconds to read an address. what do you think?
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  • edited December 2011
    those are beautiful!  You do such nice work.  Re: the postpeople, maybe do the address block more traditional because it took me a moment to figure out that the city and state were on there.  Are all the starting times on there?  IL's got an invite once that didn't have the ceremony start time on it!  (This was the SAME wedding the people didn't put their last names on the STD's)  
  • l337Jacquil337Jacqui member
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    edited December 2011
    hehe yeah, the ceremony starts at 5:30 and it's on there :) and the cocktail hour/reception is just right afterwards (in the same location)
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  • raeg13raeg13 member
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    edited December 2011
    They look AMAZING Jacqui!! You are so multi-talented!
  • edited December 2011
    They look amazing!! what font is the envelope??

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  • juliet1503juliet1503 member
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    edited December 2011
    Ditto! They look great! And btw: you're cat (both actaully!)is gorgeous. . . a friend of mine just got a kitten with similar coloring and named her tiramisu. lol. :)
  • l337Jacquil337Jacqui member
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    edited December 2011
    thanks guys!!! the font on the envelope is bickham script fancy, and that's awesome about the cat! siamese are a super fun breed!!! :D he's my lil' mama's boy
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