Advice Please PIP

shan87

I got an email from VP about free labels and was thinking of using them for our OOT/Welcome Bags. (Stick them in the  middle of the bags)
Here is my first attempt at designing one and I'm looking for feedback.



I can't tell where I should put the text - should it be right centered instead?!?

(I haven't check into bags yet but I am thinking we are going to get Coral or Deep Pink colored ones; depending on how much money is left we may be able to get bigger bags and fill them with more etc)
 
TIA Ladies!

abbywis

I would center it under the line.

eta:  And bring down the bride/groom so the line comes at the bride's waist.

shan87

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[QUOTE]I would center it under the line. eta:  And bring down the bride/groom so the line comes at the bride's waist.
Posted by abbywis[/QUOTE]

I actually can't move the bride and groom (or the line) because it's a template

EmilyCMN

I like it how it is. I might try to move the writing down a little further if possible to center it between the line and the bottom but that is getting pretty picky... No one will notice. I think it looks great!

brink131

I'm kinda a visual person and would need to see it to be sure, but maybe the text should be centered under the line.

[Deleted User]

I think it looks nice the way it is!

Steph0871

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[QUOTE]In Response to Re: Advice Please PIP : I actually can't move the bride and groom (or the line) because it's a template
Posted by shan87[/QUOTE]

<div>Can you swap your monogram and the text then? Maybe add the text to the top and center the (larger) monogram on the bottom?</div>

shan87

Alrighty here is it centered (vertically)



and here it is right centered




which one do you ladies like better?

shan87

Egh they just went from Free to $2.99 -- LAME Vistaprint! haha

ETA- I found an old email with free labels andthe design I used for everything else is included! Yay so we are going with this...