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Invite wording

Thumper1148Thumper1148 member
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in Michigan-Detroit
Ok, ladies I am finally getting around to my invites.  I know I am running a bit late, but I should still be ok with sending them out at the end on January. (DIY)

So I wanted to get some feedback on the wording of our invite.  We are not having a super formal wedding.  It's more of a big party with friends and family.  That being said here are our invites.  (left off parts of the invite generic, since this is a public forum)

Boy met Girl.
For the rest of the story
join
Thumper
and
Thumper's Groom
in celebration
as they tie the knot
Saturday, March Seventeenth
two thousand twelve
at specific time
Hall name
address
city, Michigan

Dinner and dancing to follow.

So what do you ladies think?
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Re: Invite wording

  • emarston1emarston1 member
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    edited December 2011
    I think it's really cute :)  If you're having a non-formal event, it's very nice!

    I don't notice anything off the top of my head except I assume that "City" will be capitalized.
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  • Milsey32Milsey32
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    edited December 2011
    Sorry I can't make it... it's DH's birthday! 


    Ha, but it looks good. [: 
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  • matuofmmatuofm member
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    edited December 2011
    Wait, is that St. Patrick's Day?  That would be one fun party.  :)

    I think they're really cute.
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  • Thumper1148Thumper1148 member
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    edited December 2011
    yeah, definately not formal.  LOL!  I mean I have a ncie wedding dress, but that is about it.  We just want it to be a fun party with friends and family.

    And I will go back and capitalize the city!  Thanks!
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