Need opinions and proofreading on my invite

LoveAdopted

We are printing them now, just want to make sure this sounds ok! Thanks!

Together with their parents
Laura Nicole ...
and
Joseph Robert ....
invite you to share in the joy
as they become husband and wife
SATURDAY . THE TENTH OF JULY
two thousand ten
AT FOUR-THIRTY IN THE AFTERNOON
WACHUSETT VILLAGE INN
9 Village Inn Road . Westminster . Massachusetts

allisong23

The only thing I noticed was "invite you to share in the joy". Do you want to say "their joy"? It could just be me, but I visualize Joy dishwashing detergent being passed around a wedding reception ("Clean dishes for everyone!!").

It is very possible it is me though.

ipuella

Hahaha Allison! I thought the same thing, minus your visual. That made me LOL though!

Looks good otherwise!

noodle_oo

The capitalization of random lines seems weird to me, but I'm assuming it works with your layout.

And yes, I'd say "their joy" not "the joy". 

Some people will probably say you should be writing "at half after four in the afternoon" rather than "four thirty".

I think I'd say "two thousand and ten" rather than just "two thousand ten".

Just some alternatives to give you options!  congrats!

lundar

I like four thirty.

LoveAdopted

Aaahhh you guys are right! I fixed it though... guests are now invited to share in our joy, no dishwashing required.