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Invite wording--is this correct?

Would anyone mind giving my invite wording a second set of eyes and letting me know if it's correct?  The more I research on the net, the more confused I become.
(Please ignore spacing, it didn't paste the way I thought it would). I'm DIY-ing to save $$ and I want to make sure this looks good before showing my mom. 
 
Here's the invite wording:

Two lives, two hearts
joined together in friendship, united forever in love.
Mr. and Mrs. Dad and Mom Last Name
request the pleasure of your company as
My Name
&
His Name

Celebrate their marriage and love

Date
Time
Location
Street Address
Town and Zip code

Reception To Immediately Follow

4/29/12
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