Wedding Etiquette Forum

Invite wording--is this correct?

Would anyone mind giving my invite wording a second set of eyes and letting me know if it's correct?  The more I research on the net, the more confused I become.
(Please ignore spacing, it didn't paste the way I thought it would). I'm DIY-ing to save $$ and I want to make sure this looks good before showing my mom. 
Here's the invite wording:

Two lives, two hearts
joined together in friendship, united forever in love.
Mr. and Mrs. Dad and Mom Last Name
request the pleasure of your company as
My Name
His Name

Celebrate their marriage and love

Street Address
Town and Zip code

Reception To Immediately Follow

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