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Help me with saying this better, thank you for welcome letter

I'm trying to write up a brief thank you blurb to go in our welcome booklets, and coming up with a complete literary blank.  I want to thank people for coming to Hawaii from MN, and then I'm not sure what else to say.  Anything profound or poetic about getting married?  What did you do or say?

So far, I've got "We are so thankful that you are able to join us in Hawaii and share our wedding with us."  And that's it.  Any ideas?

Re: Help me with saying this better, thank you for welcome letter

  • In the place of beautiful beaches and dreams.,  We are glad you could be here and be park of our dream that is becoming a reality  .  I suck too sorry
  • Hey, that's better than what I have so far!
  • oops part  sorry.    Good luck.     Try this.  This is gonna be one awesome vacation!  ALl of my favorite people here and I am getting married could it be better
  • In true love the smallest distance is too great, and the greatest distance can be bridged.  ~Hans Nouwens

    Thank you for traveling this great distance to celebrate our love and marriage.

    Your names

    (English major, hope this helps)
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  • Awesome, thanks Jesse!  Those are all really helpful, got my ideas going!
  • I just stole this for my wedding favors.  This is really good
    In Response to <a href="http://forums.theknot.com/Sites/theknot/Pages/Main.aspx/wedding-boards_etiquette_saying-this-better-thank-welcome-letter?plckFindPostKey=Cat:Wedding%20BoardsForum:9Discussion:ee2872fc-a202-43e6-a34e-ca2846baea5dPost:07a7f6fa-f7f4-42f9-aadb-5be0ed0bda59">Re: Help me with saying this better, thank you for welcome letter</a>:
    [QUOTE]Or, these were the fronts of our favours: Thank you for being a part of our wedding day and for always supporting and encouraging us as we have experienced the highs and lows of life. You have helped us to become the people we are today. We are grateful for the outpouring of love as we begin the next exciting chapter of our loves. With all our love & thanks, (our names)
    Posted by mrs.jesse[/QUOTE]
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