My turn for menu opinions...

hbrynn

Since you're already in menu mode, I'd love to hear all your thoughts on mine. The preview is showing two to a page since that's how it will print. I'm going to attempt to make it clickable so forgive me if it doesn't happen. [url] http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B54lNILBntm9ZWIwZjk1NTAtY2VmMS00NmRlLThlNDUtODFlYWNlY2Q4YWRl&hl=en [/url] Hopefully it works.... TIA

hbrynn

I made a clicky! yay!

Rosie24

I like the format and your mono. I honestly am not a fan of your titles; engagement, marriage, etc. It is totally my opinion though!

cvl105

ditto pp

I <3 Seabass

I don't really like the titles either. Too cutesy for me and I think it will make people think longer than they should about the menu. With that said I think I think people will find it cute and it's definitely different. I would add some sort of break, like a dot or a flourish, in between the descriptions to break it up a little.

hbrynn

Where can I get a dot or flourish? any recommendations?

cvl105

you can download flourish fonts for free from dafonts.com or another font website.

uppereastgirl

I would keep Roma and Tomatoes together if at all possible.Need comma-- "Cranberries, Tossed Tableside"Need commas-- "Mashed Potatoes, Asparagus, and" (if you did them separately because it is over mashed potatoes but just with the others, I would maybe just say "with" instead of over, or say over the potatoes and with the others)I would respace that line anyway-- potatoes looks odd on its own.Make your ands consistent-- "and" or "&" but not bothAlso make your serial commas consistant: "A, B, and C" or "A, B and C" but not both (if you choose the latter you don't need a comma between Asparagus and and)"Chocolate-Covered"The at first sight blah blah is a very cute idea.