WDYT: TY Card PIP

cvl105 · June 2010

So I think I've finally decided on my TY card....except there's something off I think, like the placement of "Thank You" or is it just the whole design that's off...what do you think?

WeddingBells326 · June 2010

the picture on the right is wider then the one of the left so the Thank You is not centered correctly. Other then that everything looks fantastic!

cvl105 · June 2010

Believe it or not, the pictures are the same exact dimensions....must be a computer deception or something.

DandT1206 · June 2010

the Thank You should be a little bit lower.
It's nice, but I agree, there is something off. Maybe it's too crowded? or try using a black and white background? I can't pin point it. The photo choices are great though

Laurms15 · June 2010

I agree w/ pp or if they are the same then maybe zooming in on you guys and having less of the park in the photo will help with the balance?

USER876 · June 2010

I believe the problem is that you mixed color pix with black and white. If you do this, try to make the order more uniform.

My only other comments are:

1. Tighter crop on the top right picture
2. Replace the bottom center picture. The background is distracting and the white balance of the picture doesn't match the rest so it stands out.

cvl105 · June 2010

ok, I moved the "Thank You" lower and put the background (which is my bouquet) in black and white.

DandT1206 · June 2010

I think User is right
It's definitely the bottom area and I think it's the yellow lighting in the church that's throwing it off.

reese511 · June 2010

i think the "Thank" and the "You" are too far apart from eachother. otherwise it looks great! nice job, lady!

PS...def looks better w/ the black & white background.

VanessaB24 · June 2010

it looks better now that you lowered the thank you. i don't know but to me it looks good.

cvl105 · June 2010

cropped that picture better....background is pink, but I can turn to black and white if you think that looks better. I replaced the middle picture...what do you think of this one?

cvl105 · June 2010

moved the "thank you" closer together and put background in black for a comparison

Laurms15 · June 2010

I think it looks good. Do you feel better about it?

akmackay · June 2010

I like the one with the TY closer together and B&W background

cvl105 · June 2010

I already feel MUCH better about it. The top right picture looks so much better now that it's cropped. USER was right about that original middle picture...changed that. Now I can't decide between the black and white or colored background. I guess the b&w probably looks better...but then I wonder should I just make it a plain background, because you can't even tell that it's a bouquet anymore.

akmackay · June 2010

to be honest, I couldn't tell it was your bouquet to begin with. I think it does add dimension to it though in B&W and I would keep it.

cvl105 · June 2010

ok, good point. Thanks everyone! Keep the suggestions coming if you have them!

DandT1206 · June 2010

the last version you posted (black&white background, with the new middle pic) is great! You just need to move the Thank You up a little bit... it looks a little low.

Great job!

kasabby · June 2010

I think the last one you posted was my favorite! They look great!

cvl105 · June 2010

Thanks Danielle....how's it look now? Up higher? lower? I really appreciate your opinions!

felicia220 · June 2010

I know I am chiming in late, as usual, but the PP is the best out of all of them. I like that Thank you there better. Also for this purpose I like the picture of you two walking out better then the one at the alter.

I am impressed with your skills!